By: manvantpatel

manvantpatel — Mon, 05 May 2008 23:30:39 +0000

Pravinabahen ! It seems the poem is duplicated.
Is the play ‘HOOKY’ OR ‘HOCKY’ ? THANKS.
May I know who the poet is please ?

By: pragnaju

pragnaju — Mon, 05 May 2008 18:40:57 +0000

સ્નેહલ મઝુમદારનું અખંડ ખાંસીનું હાસ્યકાવ્ય માણ્યું.
મને ખાંસી અંગે એક શીખ યાદ આવી.
કજીયાનું મૂળ હાંસી
રોગનું મૂળ ખાંસી
અહીં નાની તકલીફમાં તબીબી સારવારની કડાકૂટ ભારી લાગે તેથી અમે-ખાંસીમાં ઘરગથ્થુ ઈલાજ આદુનો+તુલસીનો રસ- મધમાં આપતાં અને અજમા તથા લસણની પોટલી બનાવી નાક પાસે સૂંઘવા આપતા કે મીઠું અને હળદરવાળો શેકેલો અજમો જમ્‍યા પછી મુખવાસ તરીકે આપતા તો રાહત થઈ- ઘણા ખરી વાર ડો.ને ત્યાં જવું ન પડતું.
પણ આ હાસ્યકાવ્ય વાંચી આ સારવારની ખરેખર ઈલાજ તરીકેની કવિતા યાદ આવી!
Today I wheezed, today I sneezed,
today I learned a lesson.
That breathing in and out each day
Is really quite a blessing.
Some tubes connect my mouth to my lungs,
And at times they swell up like balloons.
And when they do, the air squeeks through,
So my breathing appears out of tune.
This swelling occurs when I pat the dog,
Or run out in the cold.
When grass is cut, or leaves are raked,
Or when there’s lots of mold.
I’m absent when the tubes swell tight.
Some say I’m playing hooky,
But when breathing is a struggle,
I can’t even eat a cookie.
I’ve learned what I’ve got is called asthma.
It’s a good thing for me that I’m bright.
I test my breathing at the start of each day,
And avoid things that make the tubes tight.
The dog sleeps in the basement.
I keep my stuffed toys clean.
No one’s allowed to smoke inside,
Hope you don’t think that’s mean.
Sometimes no matter what I do
The tubes swell anyhow,
But I have tricks tucked up my sleeve.
I’ll share some with you now.
I puff special medicine into my mouth
With a nebulizer gadget.
It works to open up the tubes.
It really is like magic.
Before I play some basketball
Or run out in the rain,
I puff a different medicine.
Then I can join the game.
I don’t eat many junk foods,
And I try hard not to whine.
These tricks help me stay healthy,
So most times I’m just fineToday I wheezed, today I sneezed,
today I learned a lesson.
That breathing in and out each day
Is really quite a blessing.
Some tubes connect my mouth to my lungs,
And at times they swell up like balloons.
And when they do, the air squeeks through,
So my breathing appears out of tune.
This swelling occurs when I pat the dog,
Or run out in the cold.
When grass is cut, or leaves are raked,
Or when there’s lots of mold.
I’m absent when the tubes swell tight.
Some say I’m playing hooky,
But when breathing is a struggle,
I can’t even eat a cookie.
I’ve learned what I’ve got is called asthma.
It’s a good thing for me that I’m bright.
I test my breathing at the start of each day,
And avoid things that make the tubes tight.
The dog sleeps in the basement.
I keep my stuffed toys clean.
No one’s allowed to smoke inside,
Hope you don’t think that’s mean.
Sometimes no matter what I do
The tubes swell anyhow,
But I have tricks tucked up my sleeve.
I’ll share some with you now.
I puff special medicine into my mouth
With a nebulizer gadget.
It works to open up the tubes.
It really is like magic.
Before I play some basketball
Or run out in the rain,
I puff a different medicine.
Then I can join the game.
I don’t eat many junk foods,
And I try hard not to whine.
These tricks help me stay healthy,
So most times I’m just fine.
If breathing in and breathing out
A zillion times each day,
Is something you do without thinking a thought,
Thank God for this gift when you pray..
If breathing in and breathing out
A zillion times each day,
Is something you do without thinking a thought,
Thank God for this gift when you pray.
આવી દરેક રોગની ગુજરાતી કવિતા બનાવી હોય તો??

By: વિશ્વદીપ બારડ

વિશ્વદીપ બારડ — Mon, 05 May 2008 15:10:07 +0000

sunadar..

By: kapil dave

kapil dave — Mon, 05 May 2008 13:46:11 +0000

khubaj saras

By: pravinash1

pravinash1 — Mon, 05 May 2008 08:58:25 +0000

Unbelievable. What apoetic way to look
at ‘Khansi’.
I think at that time all the poetry runs away.

By: કુણાલ

કુણાલ — Mon, 05 May 2008 07:15:29 +0000

જબરુ આ તો !!

By: સુરેશ જાની

સુરેશ જાની — Mon, 05 May 2008 04:50:09 +0000

વાહ, મજા આવી ગઈ. અને બધા છંદો પણ મને બહુ જ પ્રીય છે.

By: NEETAKOTECHA

NEETAKOTECHA — Mon, 05 May 2008 03:03:40 +0000

શરદી થાશે ત્યારે ચોક્ક્સ આ બધુ જ યાદ આવશે….

By: manvant

manvant — Sun, 04 May 2008 19:56:25 +0000

AAHAA HAA HAA ! VAAH !
SAB DARDO KAA MOOL !!!!!

By: Chirag Patel

Chirag Patel — Sun, 04 May 2008 13:58:00 +0000

અરે વાહ નીલબેન. છન્દમાં હાસ્ય રસ. ઉત્તમ.

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